Senin, 14 September 2009

When I Graduated from High School

Before we absolutely graduated from Senior High School, my friends and I had made planned if after graduation we went to Bali. First we decided the places where will we went to. Then we decided where place we would to stayed. The day after graduation, we continued to Bali. On there we planned to just stayed for three nights. At the first day, we just take a rest all day long because we very tired after travelled. In the night, we tried to take a walked. Then we found a place to drink some coffee. We back to our hotel at midnight. At the second day, we visited the places where we had decided before. After all we wasted our time in a beach, swimming, diving, and riding some tourism facility. At the last day, we looking for some gifts to our family, it's not much because our money was empty. That is the most special experience of mine because after that we never saw each other and we can only remember it in our heart. . . .

3 komentar:

  1. Blogwalking Yah ke superarmyrog.blogspot.com

    by:wen

    BalasHapus
  2. okay. Just check your grammar. And try to use your topic sentence at the beginning of the paragraph, you can check your outline for that. Write your revision on your notebook and we'll see next friday

    -Miss CC-

    BalasHapus
  3. ni hao!
    jalan2 k blogQu yak...
    lampionhitam.blogspot.com
    si ya....

    BalasHapus